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ok so these are the past two i wrote, i had writers block(nothing good i wanted on paper) then i broke out one day and wrote these two back to back


The River

Flowing in the river that is me
from the rolling stones
to the unborn salmon
cascaded along side of me,
is the seeds that we call trees.
that of which is I am...
is long gone.

that which was me has flowed into the camotion of the sea
though consumption of me
by those who reside in me,
leads me back to my river
for that is where our birth is
and at the mouth of birth
there you will find the settled sliver
off that which was me
patiently waiting,
for rebirth into that which I am.

I am nothing.
yet with a twist i am everything,
that which is inevitable
is growth.

but how doth nothing grow?
if nothing grows does it become something?

yet something is a value,
so to value nothing...
is everything.







then i had wrote this one after trying to make it more for a slam poetry

Haze of melancholy


Hearts ablaze in the haze of melancholy
I dare to hold my head high.
to redefine the line between
happiness and consciousness.
yes, I dare to draw the line
to reach out and grab knowledge
by the fruit we were condemned by
to set aside that which is socially accepted.

to shadow the day
and illuminate the night
to take rightiousness upon me with each flight.
karma is a bitch so thats why she stays on my side
and in the midst of her aggression,
I told her I told her to just let it ride.

I am her ocean and she is my fire
I am her wind and she is my earth
together we have a new form of birth.
but with a new form of birth
comes a new form of death.
so when I die,
know I though she was beautiful.
(i say this a litte faster) like when my fire met her water
it created the crustations of which
I now call me.
and when my fire met her water-pause-
I found purpose.

yet with every form of purpose
comes a form of failure.
like the sound of a cricket
in the back round it will itch at your ear
approaching the problem will not help you find it,
for it will know you are near.
storms upon tsunami
fire upon my trees
re-birthing each-other gives me air to breathe
and when I breathe,
growth becomes us.
Hearts aligned in the haze of melancholy
I find I am at ease.


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Free forms poems. Interesting thoughts, although a bit disjointed in parts

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yeah you can tell when i took a short break from writing


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Had a case of writer's block?

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Don't mind me, just reviving a dead topic.

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