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Post I wrote a lil sumthin sumthin
"Remember"

You left cold
And you left broken
Talk to me, why won’t you talk?

When I see you now, you look distant.
It’s like I don’t know you.
Your expressionless face.
You won’t ever answer my call.

You’re dressed in my favourite lace,
I also picked that shawl.
I hope it'll keep you warm,
But I guess where you are,
You won’t need it at all.

I know you didn't really choose to leave,
But I still find this hard to believe.
You didn't stay even though you listened to my plea.
It wouldn't have happened if it wasn't for me.

You smell now of pine.
And you will always be mine.
I'll never forget.
But I'll cry because my last touch, you never felt.
And you'll never feel me again.
I just wish somebody above could explain.

Please don't leave me,
Though It’s too late of me to ask now.
You meant so much.
Just give my baby back to me.

I saw the light leave your eyes.
A sight I'll never forget.
You’ve left me cold.
You’ve left me broken.
Oh heaven give my baby back.
Everyday I'll think of when you left me as I cried.
I'll always remember the day you died.

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Post Re: I wrote a lil sumthin sumthin
The first part instantly reminded me of this.

Here I sit,
Broken hearted;
Tried to shit,
But only farted.

This has been a public service announcement from CBP. :P

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lol trust cbp to bring something so random to a srs topic...

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