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 narratives i wrote 
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My very being is very contradictory my mind is now filled with insanity I was cold and acted distantly And then i found an epiphany "Who cares as long as i hide it inside of me" we are the unusual we are no longer confused our strength is fused and we are united as one unlike you Yet we are the few join us as we find the truth

"the uncouth few" Written by arch_enemy




In this modern age of technology and law, the truth lies in the dark past death's shadowy maw, the only escape is the power of the lord, pay heed to the signs past every door, if you are wise you will heed the call.

"Technology and law" Written by arch_enemy







If someone can tell me how to post photos i have some i was going to post like my unmasking and some other stuff

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
arch_enemy wrote:
[Blah, blah, blah; stuff. Oh wait, you put the actual poem before the title. Maybe try again.]

"the uncouth few" Written by arch_enemy [Let me also unfuck that title for you.]

The Uncouth Few

arch_enemy


My very being is very contradictory my mind is now filled with insanity I was cold and acted distantly And then I found an epiphany "Who cares as long as I hide it inside of me" we are the unusual we are no longer confused our strength is fused and we are united as one unlike you Yet we are the few join us as we find the truth

[You shitsack: where the fuck was the punctuation in that? It's not even a sentence!]

Technology and Law

arch_enemy


[Whoa there, you little shiza. Formatting isn't just for triforce.]
In this modern age of technology and law
the truth lies in the dark past death's shadowy maw
the only escape is the power of the lord
pay heed to the signs past every door
if you are wise you will heed the call.

"Technology and law" Written by arch_enemy
[Why did you lead this line with a space? Are you dim?]





[Jesus Hitlor Christ! Look at all that empty fucking space! You format like a worm; pointlessly with dirt then drown in the rain.]
If someone can tell me how to post photos i have some i was going to post like my unmasking and some other stuff


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This is not in any fucking kind of order. Did you even try? I don't think you even tried.

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But seriously, I didn't even read your poems, I just saw the formatting issues to be so glaring that I was unable to even read the content. If you're expecting people to read something you wrote you should give your words a pleasant presentation.

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
First off fuck you asshole
Secondly go bitch about "punctuation" to someone who cares about such pointless shit
also i didn't take the time to write these they just popped into my head i just thought someone might find them interesting
And the poll was laid out that way so stupid uncaring fucktards wouldn't just click one at random and just because they fucking could
So as i already said fuck off cunt-bucket

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
arch_enemy wrote:
First off fuck you asshole
Secondly go bitch about "punctuation" to someone who cares about such pointless shit
also i didn't take the time to write these they just popped into my head i just thought someone might find them interesting
And the poll was laid out that way so stupid uncaring fucktards wouldn't just click one at random and just because they fucking could
So as i already said fuck off cunt-bucket

You'll fit right in here.

And your signature is broke as it gets. Maybe you should have lurked some? For the sake of example: at all.

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
Seeing people overreact triggers a deep-seated, devilish emotion inside of me. I start grinning and laughing as I realize a nerve has been hit. That's blood in the water. I'll remember this fondly.

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
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Seeing people overreact triggers a deep-seated, devilish emotion inside of me. I start grinning and laughing as I realize a nerve has been hit. That's blood in the water. I'll remember this fondly.


Fuck you too, shitcunt. :REESE :REESE :REESE

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
This is now a thread about overreacting.

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Post Re: poems/songs/ and or narratives i wrote
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"First off fuck you asshole"

I love it.

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Post Re: narratives i wrote
honestly these poems are shit.

But don't stop writing shit! you always start with a pile of dog shit and then you keep fucking with it over and over until it gradually mutates via natural selection into a gold trophy that will get you teh good sex!

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Rem wrote:
Seeing people overreact triggers a deep-seated, devilish emotion inside of me. I start grinning and laughing as I realize a nerve has been hit. That's blood in the water. I'll remember this fondly.

i'm going to necropost this because i forgot... fuck you too

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Necromancy is legal here. This has been Yom with 'FH Etiquette Today.' Tune in next week as-

*In a bright flash of light, the studio ceases to exist. Cuts to 'Cruel Angels Thesis'.*

Also... if we created an artificial sun the size of a chevrolet and set it to geostable orbit on our rogue planet, does it mean that heliocentric astronomy no longer applies?

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